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Have You Ever?
Contributed by
Mick_Puttock
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Sunday, 18th August 2002 @ 08:36:24 AM in AEST
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Have you ever loved someone, but you know, they just don't care.
And now you always feel like crying, because they are not there?.
Have you ever seen your star, you make your wish upon
And then you go back inside, and play that sad, love song.
Have you ever seen the one, and whispered, " I love you"
And have you ever said these words, and wished, to hear them too.
Have you ever wished for the day, when two, can become one
But deep inside you know your fear, will stop this, from being done.
Have you ever thought that love is not, what it's made out to be
Because of all the pain you feel, that no one else can see
Have you ever sat and stared, out into the empty space
Dreaming for the day when you, are both in that, special place
Have you ever felt an emptiness, that burns into your soul
Because of how you miss them, without them, you don't feel whole
Have you ever knelt and prayed, and then you prayed some more
For the one thing in this world that would, heal your inner sores
Have you ever sat all night, crying from all your pain
Until the tears flow no more, and you finally go insane.
Have you ever considered the choice, between this pain and death
And maybe even thought to die, would eventually be, the best.
And so my friend I know all this, you see it's all too true
For all these years I have known, I am in love with you.
Copyright Mick. Puttock 31st January 1999
Copyright ©
Mick_Puttock
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2002-08-18 08:36:24]
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Re: Have You Ever?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 18th August 2002 @ 08:44:48 AM AEST
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Great write, Mick.....we want more!!!!
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Re: Have You Ever?
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by EileenK on
Sunday, 18th August 2002 @ 12:46:52 PM AEST
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Yeah been there done that...
Greetings from me in cold rainy Sydney to you in the sunny tropics .. but at least we are getting that much needed rain.
Cheers
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Re: Have You Ever?
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by Holly on
Monday, 19th August 2002 @ 09:17:38 AM AEST
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All I can say is.......
Yes.
Holly |
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Re: Have You Ever?
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by MisterRight on
Friday, 23rd August 2002 @ 06:00:36 PM AEST
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yes I have, to all those things.
Amazing poem, well put into words!
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Re: Have You Ever?
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by WordPoet on
Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 06:07:43 AM AEST
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| My God.... If I didn't know better I'd swear you were writing this about my life and how I feel. I can totally relate. Good write. |
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Re: Have You Ever?
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by TeeJay on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 06:53:48 PM AEST
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| Yes I have, Mick! :( I know exactly how it feels... Beautiful heartfelt write... |
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Re: Have You Ever?
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by Eloise on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 05:01:23 PM AEST
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| this poem is so beautiful... |
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Re: Have You Ever?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:30:18 AM AEST
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| this poem is so relevant to how i feel. However my honest heart was corrupted to satisfy the desire. great poem though. |
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