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The Ring
Contributed by
Hamp
on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The bands made of silver,
The stones, eons old.
The two forged together,
As your and my souls.
This is no trinket,
I plea for you to wear.
This is my emblem,
To show the world I care.
This joining carries value,
One of worldly sense.
But the value pales greatly,
To our oneness, hence.
Knowing this, to you I plead,
As you accept this ring.
Look past the glitter,
Past the worldly things.
Understand its making.
Its joining from above.
Understand the eons taken,
And compare them to my love.
Hamp Nichols
Copyright ©
Hamp
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2003-10-03 14:05:00]
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Re: The Ring
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by Tanna on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 10:26:11 AM AEST
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This is beautiful.
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Re: The Ring
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by WinterFawn on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 06:59:08 AM AEST
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Beautifully composed verse of love and committment...very heartwarming.
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