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Your Past (Senryu String)
Contributed by
Dragons_Of_Rose
on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Your Past
(Senryu String)
I remember you
But you dont remember me
As our paths meet here.
You introduce her
As your destined bride to be
And flash that smile.
My heart begs to leave
But I hide among the crowd
And watch as you dance.
The happiness shines
Through the windows of your soul
As you hold her close
And I realize
That she has become your dream
And I am your past.
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Dragons_Of_Rose
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2003-10-03 23:45:00]
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Re: Your Past (Senryu String)
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by poetrygodslove on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 12:40:43 AM AEST
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Re: Your Past (Senryu String)
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by Philipa on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 08:52:48 PM AEST
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Very well done. I enjoyed your poem especially the ending. Thanks for sharing.
Philipa |
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