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Escape from death
Contributed by
ravi
on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Clouds of darkness engulfed me,
Gigantic brown waves creating whirlpools,
Sucking me deeper and deeper into hell.
The odious stench suffocating me,
Hot scalding steam burning into me.
No sign of shore, devoid of life,
my legs felt useless, heavy like lead.
The viscous liquid choking my senses,
images appearing blurred, distorted,
I began vomiting bile mixed with blood.
Death began dancing before my petrified eyes,
I am doomed to die,slowly, very horribly.
Suddenly, a strange force pulled me out,
I escaped unscathed from the jaws of death.
Under the clear, blue skies, I heard a voice,
This damn fly spoiled my coffee.
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ravi
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2003-10-04 00:45:00]
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Re: Escape from death
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by Kalika on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 01:42:22 AM AEST
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very interesting.......
Kali |
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Re: Escape from death
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 12:04:47 PM AEST
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Hi ravi,
this is very good,from a point of view,
keep up the good write. |
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