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what went wrong
Contributed by
lil_angel_eyes
on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
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Where did I go wrong
To be the cause of this pain
Where did I turn
To cause all this strain
What happened to my life
What happened to me
Wheres the loving girl
That I used to be
Where did the love go
That I held so near
Why am I surrounded
By my deepest fear
Where did I go wrong
To lose everything I know
Why was I so stupid
To let everything go
Where did I go wrong
To you my love I send
Where did I go wrong
For my life to end
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2003-10-04 09:05:00]
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Re: what went wrong
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by norticus on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 10:59:16 AM AEST
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| Oh your still on that kick. 2.93 Nortiscale and all. |
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Re: what went wrong
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 07:07:27 PM AEST
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There's just too many questions to ask, and no answers, no satisfying answers anyway. Hope everything will be okay.
Emma. |
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Re: what went wrong
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 11:06:22 PM AEST
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Omg... you have NO IDEA how much I relate to this right at this very moment. It's eerie, I tell you!! Awesome write, it just about gave me goosebumps.
~ Moonlit |
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