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How much???
Contributed by
lil_angel_eyes
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Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
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Just how much more can I take
Before my lonely heart will break
How much more can I stand
Before my life is in gods hand
How much more can I feel
Knowing my life isnt real
How much longer can I last
Living each day by the past
The answers none, I cant take this
So now this is my final wish
Leave me cold, let me die
My lonely heart will say goodbye
Live your life with me gone
For I know that ive done wrong
Live your life till you feel whole
Let me rest my hurting soul.
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2003-10-04 10:05:00]
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Re: How much???
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by norticus on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 10:47:24 AM AEST
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| Goodbye. Have fun being dead and all. I give this a 3.9 on the Nortiscale. |
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Re: How much???
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 06:55:30 PM AEST
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Awww Angel this is so sad...an excellent write just hertbreaking for me to read. I know words may not mean much but stay strong. Take care.
Emma. |
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