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Into the Void
Contributed by
HumGirl18
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Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel so completely alone
I could gaze into the void forever
No movement except the blinking of my eyes
The steady rise and fall of my chest
Does this blank expression do justice
Or Does it capture the intensity of my pain
Does it lead straight through to my most secret fears
I hear them whisper outside my door
Their voices like rain on a roof
I make up my mind, right here and now
I won't them in or chase me away
Surely their noise will fade
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2003-10-04 16:35:00]
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Re: Into the Void
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 05:27:53 PM AEST
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I like this a lot just keep at it the last poem I posted 'Love's Torment' took me a long time to write and then one day it just all spilled out. So keep at this poem it looks like it could be an awesome write!
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