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War
Contributed by
fairyfloss
on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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My gunshots can be heard from here to the desert
My scars are now more than skin deep
This is a battle against my enemies
This is a battle against myself
My anger is louder than their cries
My blood covers their land
I feel this is my place in the world
My face is flashed all over the newspapers
My gunshots are heard all over the news
Only for a day or two do you think of me
I murder your family
I starve your friends
Your fathers blood fills the T.V. screen
Your mothers screams echo through the speakers
But nobody cares except when it involves them
This is my work and I am proud
You think I am harmless to you
One day Ill come knocking on your door
My gun is loaded
My brave face ready
I am ready to fight
I am war
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fairyfloss
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2003-10-04 19:05:00]
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Re: War
(User Rating: 1 )
by garyh on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 08:22:54 PM AEST
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| again very nice... you have great ideas for your work...just some sentences have 1 or 2 more syllables than what is needed... nothing that a little editing couldn't help though... great job |
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