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FORGOTTEN
Contributed by
fairyfloss
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Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 08:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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FORGOTTEN
Im swimming all alone
In this ocean filled with problems
Waves of anger are crashing down
Dragging me beneath the sea
Seaweed brushes past my face
Salt engulfs my throat
Im drifting further and further
The shore is lost in the distant
Arctic breeze against my face
Zest of salt stinging my lips
Tears are lost in this vast ocean
Cries are unheard with the spirits of the sea
Prayers unanswered with the gods in heaven
Mistakes are forgotten in this time of need
Sentiments are left behind
Drifting, drifting further away
No longer will I exist
My face will be a mere memory
My name soon forgotten
I was just another face in the crowd
Just another laugh in the room
A nobody
Im forgotten
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fairyfloss
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2003-10-04 20:45:00]
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Re: FORGOTTEN
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by emystar on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 11:20:22 PM AEST
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With writing like this u 'll never be 4 gotten!
Very good explanation of ones feelings.
I feel 4 gotton at times but I know I'm not.
hang tuff,
emy |
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Re: FORGOTTEN
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 05:48:03 PM AEST
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wow this was awesome I'm awestruck and you are definitely not a nobody if u can write like that although I know what its like to feel like a nothing. Keep on posting!
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