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Look into my soul
Contributed by
Clown_Prince
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Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If you could look into my soul,
And see the darkness within.
The pain and the suffering that I've kept bottled in.
The inner demons that torment me,
If you saw the manifestation of that pain.
Then Lord help you,
For you might just go insane.
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2003-10-04 22:05:00]
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Re: Look into my soul
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by emystar on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 11:02:06 PM AEST
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I hear every word of this!
Trust me, it's possible 2 go insane more than once!
It's when I loose my sanity when my creator steps in!
Very good explanation of ones feelings.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Look into my soul
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 06:22:15 AM AEST
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| Ok maybe I am insane, cause to be honest with you I found it had a slightly humerous quality to it, with dark shroud enveloping the poem, short sweet and to the point excellent, keep it up. |
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Re: Look into my soul
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by arden on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 02:05:36 PM AEST
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short and powerful. nicely done. keep it up.
Arden |
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