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Just say you're proud of me
Contributed by
Eloise
on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 02:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I see her sit alone and weep
Tears fall as she cries
What she fights for she cant keep
Her life, a bunch of lies
She gets punished
Her knees are skinned
Emotions raw
Undisciplined
She has to leave
She'd like to stay
She doesnt want to
Go away
But the end has come
Theres time, no more
She's never asked
What she's crying for
Suicide's wrong
She knows that
But a thousand words
Won't bring her back
She's always heard
"i hate you" and "leave"
She doesnt expect
Them all to grieve
My throat is sore
My hands are numb
I tried to make you
Love me, Mum
But I cant fight
What I cant see
Please Mum, just say
You're proud of me
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Eloise
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2003-10-05 02:35:00]
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Re: Just say you're proud of me
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by shelby on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 11:41:53 AM AEST
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this broke my heart, I know this all to well have same trouble with one of my parents as well.
Hang in there hun I know its hard but you have a friend in me, not the same as a parent but someone who cares just the same. Im sorry for your pain, Im wishing many blessing on you.
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Re: Just say you're proud of me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 07:43:33 PM AEST
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| aww...how sad.. o.o... |
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