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while my heart is
Contributed by
lil_angel_eyes
on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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While my heart is filled with sorrow
And im not sure what I will see tomorrow
I know one thing thats will always be
is the love thats held between you and me
Its a very special love to share
Knowing we will always care
About the way each other may feel
And how in time our hearts will heal
our love is like putting a key in a door
our love will be forever more
just to let you know this is true
Baby Im in love with you.
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2003-10-05 09:05:00]
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Re: while my heart is
(User Rating: 1 )
by EternitysLyre on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 06:56:37 AM AEST
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| Not bad, but i'm sort of disappointed on how you riddled it with minor errors. It's a good poem with excellent content. But it could've been an excellent poem, too. |
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