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In My Skin
Contributed by
hazelnut
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Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 10:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Strip me bare and lay me on the cold concrete floor
Rip off this skin
That Im too uncomfortable in
Expose the flesh and bone
Spill the crimson blood that shone
In the glittering moonlight
Leave my soul naked to the sight
In my delusion, I cannot tell from wrong to right
The world is painted in shades of grey
Now stained with a brilliant red, the colour of blood
My blood
I feel the tears
Of my flesh, the pain that sears
Numbness set in, drained
Of emotion and blood
Free of my cocoon, freed from the shackles of pain
Copyright ©
hazelnut
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2003-10-05 22:25:00]
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Re: In My Skin
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 01:47:25 AM AEST
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| Deep, dark, and painful..... what a poem. You painted a portrait of such beauty, also. Awesome poem! |
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Re: In My Skin
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 03:50:31 AM AEST
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Wow Hazelnut....very powerful write, and done in just the right light!
As you say here on this sight AWESOME
I felt as if you'd skiinned me too!
I read it twice...each time my heart tingled!
Wonderful poem, great write!
Hope it brought some relief for you.
Warm Love,
Lovigincritters
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Re: In My Skin
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 09:53:22 PM AEST
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| in my delusion........great write!!! |
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