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Ocean
Contributed by
outsider
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Monday, 19th August 2002 @ 10:21:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Standing on the cliff
I looked out to sea and thought of you.
The ocean roared and swelled beneath
My feet the wind whipped spray took
My breath away.
In the ocean your eyes brightly shone,
Sunlight casting your smile on the shore.
Your voice calling me carried upon
The all encompassing breeze.
I leaped, dived into you, free!
I flew past the rocks and into your surf
To swim in your ocean eternally.
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2002-08-19 10:21:21]
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Re: Ocean
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by Lovingangel4u on
Monday, 19th August 2002 @ 11:47:17 PM AEST
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| What a wonderful expression of love I am diving in with u . ILU :) |
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Re: Ocean
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by OreO on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 05:55:32 AM AEST
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This is absolutely breathtaking
I really like the way you express your
love here, it's beautiful. Thanks for
sharing this one i enjoyed this write
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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