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Apple
Contributed by
norticus
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Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 11:31:41 AM in AEST
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Apple so red, so sweet
My apple is a healthy treat
And when I bite it, it turns brown
It's appealing force is going down
Down and then it's just a core
Thrown away and now nothing more.
jz
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norticus
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2003-10-08 11:31:41]
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Re: Apple
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by Philipa on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 01:40:26 PM AEST
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hehhehe pretty funny. It's hard to write poetry about a piece of fruit. Well done.
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Re: Apple
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 02:42:14 PM AEST
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INTERESTING
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