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Why lie??
Contributed by
addie
on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 04:16:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The night is dull,
Emptiness in the sky,
The moon is bright and full,
The Question before me is why did I lie?
Thought it would take you high
Little did I know that it would make me sit and cry
But one day it had to die
I sit here with all the guilt
I realize that the trust I had built,
Has been shattered by this act of mine.
My mind is really distressed,
--- but hey I said sorry
well dont forget the faith u have messed
I wonder and realize
I am responsible for committing a crime,
Sins and rewards, both cant be kept
The guilt takes me close to sufferings
Sufferings, I hope make me happy.
Oh But he has forgiven you
Hes no longer angry and blue
The sufferings have been blessed
Those deeds have been pressed
The more I suffer, the better I feel.
The night slowly closes.
Copyright ©
addie
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2003-10-09 04:16:52]
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Re: Why lie??
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 06:56:14 AM AEST
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| A sad story......... Pretty writing, but sad. I like this one! Don't let this lie get ya down, God ALWAYS forgives if you're sincere =) Great write! |
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Re: Why lie??
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 08:12:57 AM AEST
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Really touching write....
Jenni |
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Re: Why lie??
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by sugarboy on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 11:21:21 AM AEST
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| It's heartbreakingly sad- and I admire the honesty in these words. |
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Re: Why lie??
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by Lone_er on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 08:29:24 PM AEST
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| Very truthful emotional disclosure-Well done maam--Russ |
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