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The Ocean's Embrace
Contributed by
sughy
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Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 03:04:07 PM in AEST
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I take off and run into the darkness
Allowing the cold rain to hit my face
My cold heart begins to beat very fast
But still I continue to keep my pace
I can hear the loud, violent waves crashing
Into the cliff's sharp, jagged rocks below
Above me the stars are shining bright
My reassurance continues to grow
I dare not to look at the steps taken
Because I'm afraid of what I will see
So I close my eyes and hold out my arms
Ready for the ocean's embrace on me
I take one last breath before I plummet
Into the darkness, not sure where I'll stop
The cool sea breeze ran through and welcomed me
I could feel my cold heart begin to drop
It seemed like forever before I reached
The secure feeling I've been searching for
My problems remain on the rocky cliff
My New World is here, on the ocean's floor
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sughy
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2003-10-09 15:04:07]
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Re: The Ocean's Embrace
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 11:59:35 AM AEST
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Hi sughy,
this is the first poem of your i have read.
its very good,you express yourself very well.
keep up the good write. |
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