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Driven
Contributed by
Etah
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Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 05:25:11 PM in AEST
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I cut myself today
Im alive because it hurt
Im slowly losing all my senses
I had to feel alert
I just had to feel alive
I had to feel the pain
But the thing that hurts the most is
I know Ill bleed again
Ill never tell my friends
Because then theyll know too much
Theres no one Im that close to
No one I can trust
I have no solution
I know no cure
As blood distracts my helpless mind
I know Ive been here before
It helps for a while
It helps for a day
Pain replaces all my feelings
Lets them fade away
Tomorrow brings the scars
Tomorrow brings the healing
The emptiness creeps in again
Until thats all Im feeling
Copyright ©
Etah
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2003-10-09 17:25:11]
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Re: Driven
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by BlackFire9786 on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 06:03:30 PM AEST
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wow, this really hits close to home, i have and am dealing with cutting as well....it's hard but don't give up, you should let people read your poetry more....it's very good....i liked this a lot great job,
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Re: Driven
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by Aika on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 06:04:40 PM AEST
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dear Etah,
to have someone close
takes some time
to have someone to who tell all
needs to be brave and trust
if you were hurt
no wonders you can´t
but I can swear
also hurt was I
forgive, cos you get it back
recieve what is directed to you straight
do not stay in loneliness and pain
it is not for life
please do not hurt yourself
trust, and you will find:-) aika:-) |
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Re: Driven
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 06:17:44 PM AEST
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wow this all hit me so hard. I had to feel alive, I had to feel the pain are two lines that I absolutely love. I'm glad u found this site, this site is probably one of the reasons why I'm still here. I hope writing helps you and i hope ufind a few friends to open up to whether in real life or on the internet. Keep on writing this poem was POWERFUL.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Driven
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by stargazer on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 06:34:17 PM AEST
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On the note of sounding cliche` I'm asking you to hold on. I lost a friend over this and I never understood why he did it or what ran through his mind but reading your poem opened up that door, let me inside. I am glad you found this site.
amy |
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Re: Driven
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by hope on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 07:36:58 PM AEST
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| As they said this hit home for me, I 've been tryin to overcome cuting. You describe pain very well. I really hope the best for you |
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Re: Driven
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 07:48:44 PM AEST
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| welcome......your courage is amazing.....thank you for trusting us.....i truly hope this site brings you some peace...........great job!!! |
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Re: Driven
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 03:54:54 PM AEST
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| your poem is so sadly beautiful..... just one day at a time...... one breath at a time...... my best to you, warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa |
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