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from a distance
Contributed by
ell_03
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Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 07:47:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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From a distance
I speak your name
But close up I flee in shame
From a distance you speak mine
And it sounds
Oh,so divine.
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2003-10-09 19:47:53]
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Re: from a distance
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by stargazer on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 07:58:27 PM AEST
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| Wow. My words can not explain. This was amazing! Amy. |
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Re: from a distance
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 08:01:35 PM AEST
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Its great, but I dont really get into romantic poetry. Its a good starter now add some more bring the poem to life.............give the reader something to remember, something to dwell on. well thats only my opinion, considering Im no good at writing this sort of poetry.
One word though, post once not heaps lol people will still read it, thought everyone was posting the same for minute there.
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Re: from a distance
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 02:47:09 AM AEST
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| very pretty:) hugs n' love nessa |
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