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Angels Of Death
Contributed by
blackfire9786
on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 11:46:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I know theyre coming
With their swords of fire blessed
Roaming the world
My angels of death
They wander through the darkness
Taking lives, claiming souls
Trapping the spirits forever
Within a place that no one knows
Its not a place like heaven or hell
Not a place of pain or happiness
Its a place just like Earth
And earth of nothing but darkness
The empty souls roam the empty streets
Lost outside and in.
Convinced this is their punishment
For all their mortal sins.
When their angel of death comes back
Just to torment them some more
Large black beings with huge black swords
Entering worlds from an invisible door.
My angel of death is almost here for me
Its coming to take me away.
And among the lost souls of those dark streets
For eternity must I stay
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Re: Angels Of Death
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by Huey on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 11:58:32 PM AEST
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| Vivid..morbid..wow..Thought about my angel of death a lot..It might not exist but I can always hope for salvation..anyway great job! |
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Re: Angels Of Death
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by Tiffany on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 12:20:22 AM AEST
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| I really like this poem. It screams anger. Keep writing I would love to read more from you. |
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Re: Angels Of Death
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by jaeann on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 02:43:14 AM AEST
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| whoooo.....that was creepy...goosebumps...looking over my shoulder.....lost outside and in....great write!!!!! |
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Re: Angels Of Death
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by afraid_of_fear on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 05:36:31 AM AEST
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ooh, i really like this!! Imagery is wonderful..
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