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storm
Contributed by
me
on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 12:26:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Outside my windows lie
only shadows of reality.
The world is drowning.
All the colors have
melted from this painting.
The world is drowning,
in a puddle of white-gray
clouds,
settling heavily,
suffocating the shadows,
from above,
as the gray puddle rises up below,
to steal all hope of redemption
from this cataclysm.
The world is drowning.
A black cloud
races quickly toward my window.
I fear it will break through.
It passes over me.
The tired yellow sky now offers
faded color to the shadow-trees.
The rain is gone,
but I didnt hear the raindrops,
I sat safely behind my window,
drowning.
Copyright ©
me
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2003-10-10 00:26:49]
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Re: storm
(User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 02:35:38 AM AEST
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Re: storm
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by afraid_of_fear on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 05:29:33 AM AEST
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Oh wow, this is a beautiful poem, with so much emotion..
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