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Crimson Tears
Contributed by
glass_rose
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Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 12:05:54 AM in AEST
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I wish someone could heal my heart
And take away this pain
Wash the teardrops from my face
So I could see through endless rain
If there was a way to shorten the distance
From my aching heart to head
There would be less agony
Less inside would be dead
There is no end to malevolence
Though God knows I've cried
My head now fills with malice
My soul turns black inside
I cant explain exactly how
Hatred controls my mind
Omnipotence becomes my desire
Love is left behind
So as animosity takes over
And I'm lost throughout the years
Clouded is all that was once clear
And I cry these crimson tears
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2003-10-11 00:05:54]
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Re: Crimson Tears
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 12:13:54 AM AEST
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Beautiful write....tho so sad..
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Re: Crimson Tears
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 03:43:47 AM AEST
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| this rocks!!!! awesome piece of work!!!! |
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Re: Crimson Tears
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by emystar on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 03:58:37 AM AEST
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Very strong write here but at least you know the problem and they tell me that knowing is half the battle.
I know the feelings well.
Hang in there and keep writing as u know it's our theraphy
Sad but great writing!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Crimson Tears
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 08:36:42 AM AEST
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Oh wow you used some great words there. Excellent but sad write...but sad writes are what I relate to and that makes them even more enjoyable for me to read.
Emma. |
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Re: Crimson Tears
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by JJAA_91 on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 05:47:36 AM AEST
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| wonderfully deep with emotion. emotion i can also empathise with. a brilliant write. keep it up |
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