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BEING ALIVE
Contributed by
joydeep_nath
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Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 05:16:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A road that tries us all.
Hike it ever,forever in scorching noon.
Tread under a bone-chilling moon.
A sudden rain drenched patch
and a jasmine that lay quiet on it.
Fragrance so pure that filled the heart
and spread through the veins.
Feels like a new born, yet again.
Gimme this road any day
for such lil' islands of pleasure
of being alive.
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2003-10-11 05:16:34]
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Re: BEING ALIVE
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by trippendicular on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 11:08:57 AM AEST
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Awww....Don't just LOVE life?!!
Awesome poem
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Re: BEING ALIVE
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by TearS on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 12:21:23 PM AEST
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| Really being alive is INCREDIBLE!!! |
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Re: BEING ALIVE
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 04:01:03 AM AEST
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| Beautiful imagery......Marvelous poem! |
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Re: BEING ALIVE
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 08:37:44 AM AEST
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Very touching poem, within the soul and a beautiful imagery to heal the mind's eye.
I love the line....being born again like a new born child. Could there be anything more refreshing than that?
Marvelous poem. For just beginning you certainly have talent indeed!
Loving critters
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