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The Birth Of Death
Contributed by
TearS
on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 10:43:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Last night a mother prayed a lot to the God
In the morning she cried a lot to the nature
She buried her only son at noon to nothing
In the afternoon she slept a lot to pain
Shes found dead in the evening to peace.
A while ago a heavy storm ruined a lot to destruction
Theres no more existence of two people in the earth
At midnight for a moment the world shook
The crying of the twin informed their arrival on the earth,
Everything on the world smiles from the deep
In every birth there is a farewell to forever sleep.
Copyright ©
TearS
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2003-10-11 10:43:10]
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Re: The Birth Of Death
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 10:47:37 AM AEST
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If we accept Jesus as our Savior there is no "forever sleep"! That's what's so awesome about Christianity- you can live with the almighty God FOREVER in paradise! Just accept him........ think about it..........
Great writing too, by the way......... |
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Re: The Birth Of Death
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 10:48:20 AM AEST
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| Well done , a fine write. |
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Re: The Birth Of Death
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by Stalkee on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 12:11:25 PM AEST
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| good write...well done! =) |
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