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LIFE
Contributed by
ell_03
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Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 12:51:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life is something we have to live, Something we have to do, Life is there no matter what, Even when we don't have a clue.
Sometimes things seem odd, And we can't tell wrong from right, Things may not work out, And we feel all alone at night.
And sometimesthings are good, Things are really fun, You realize that you should live life to the fullest, Before your life is done.
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Re: LIFE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Aika on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 03:51:14 PM AEST (User
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WONDERFUL!!!!! Keep this opinion,.. I agree with you.. very very good poem.. :-) Keep writing.. all the best luck to you, aika:-) |
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Re: LIFE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 06:10:46 PM AEST (User
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Great write.... Great attitude..... Loved this poem. Hope to see lots more from you.
Jenni |
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Re: LIFE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 10:02:02 PM AEST (User
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It is a good way to look at life, You wouldnt think that reading my poetry, lol.
This was a well put together poem, and you done well to touch upon a subject that rules many peoples lives.
Excellent poem. |
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