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To my master
Contributed by
mercedes
on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 01:33:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I stand outside your door
My legs already trembling
I try to remember if I did as you asked
If pain or pleasure is in store for me
I only wish to please you
To fulfill your every desire and wish
To do all the things you ask of me
No is not a word in my vocabulary
I am new to this lifestyle
Dont know how to start
Wonder how much pain I can take
And how much pleasure I can give
I am afraid and unsure
I want to turn and go away
But I know deep down inside of me
This lifestyle is right for me
You are the one who can guide me
I will follow your every lead
You are the one who can teach me
I will take all that you give
I know that you will beat me
Make me feel unimaginable pain
Will you also tie me up, gag me
Control my every move?
My cries, my screams, my tears
I know this is your passion
My body I will freely give to you
For now you are my true master.
Copyright ©
mercedes
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2003-10-11 13:33:33]
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Re: To my master
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 04:59:01 PM AEST
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| Groovy. |
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Re: To my master
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by fallensilence on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 11:14:05 PM AEST
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wow that was very descriptive. although its not a topic most people would normally want to read about i think you did an amazing job. keep it up.
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Re: To my master
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 03:24:57 AM AEST
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there is a fine line between pain and pleasure......a very fine line......and if you're anything like me.....then all you're really trying to do is feel something.......enjoy......
and you did an awesome job on this piece.....i look forward to more.... |
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Re: To my master
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by tease_whizz on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 08:35:36 PM AEST
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| as an S&M queen, i could relate to this and found the rhythm really effective. great write. you might like my poem 'Submissive', its about the same thing. Kate x |
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