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the pain inside of me
Contributed by
ell_03
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Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 06:45:39 PM in AEST
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The pain inside of me,
Is there though no one can see.
the pain inside of me,
Is there,and always will be.
Though no one cares,
It is always there.
The pain is within,
And i just can not win.
It is the pain we all feel,
When we dont know how to deal.
We think we are insane,
When we feel that pain.
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ell_03
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2003-10-11 18:45:39]
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Re: the pain inside of me
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by mercedes on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 07:03:29 PM AEST
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| I can relate, nice write |
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Re: the pain inside of me
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by Kirby on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 08:06:26 PM AEST
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| This is why we have poetry...tobe able to tell our pains! Write about them and u will feel better! Love:::Kirby |
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Re: the pain inside of me
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 09:24:36 PM AEST
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just keep writing ....it helps so much with that pain...I know I write my way through it all the time
Shari |
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Re: the pain inside of me
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 10:04:36 PM AEST
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PAIN why does it take so much away from all?
Yet where would we be without it? sorry about the confusing answer.
This was an awesome poem keep it up. |
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Re: the pain inside of me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 10:43:15 PM AEST
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very well wrote yes the pain inside is deep and i to fear tolet out the pain the pain of not knowing what lays deep down great poetry you have wrote
good luck in all you do |
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