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Scrambled Words
Contributed by
Pompous
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Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 07:54:15 AM in AEST
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no time to think
just words on a paper
all scrambled up in a pile
while the pen sits there, overused
the words in blue ink
make no sense at all
the words in black
stand out, stand tall
crumpled papers on the floor
as I throw another down
they've all been done before
abandoned like a king, without a crown
the music that once inspired me
plays again in the background
while I'm left here blank
watching the clock go round
the pen hits the paper
but only for awhile
sentences are written
worthy of a smile
words go in and out
racing through my mind
but its mostly filled with doubt
wishing to relax and unwind
Copyright ©
Pompous
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2003-10-12 07:54:15]
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Re: Scrambled Words
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by norm on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 09:55:33 AM AEST
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Nicely written
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Like you, I've been there before,
With papers crumpled on the floor,
The words don't seem to flow at all,
Some more paper, in a ball
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Re: Scrambled Words
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 12:39:45 PM AEST
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A very good poem, it describes my work very well. I have so much unfinished poetry that are just sitting there.
Well done. |
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Re: Scrambled Words
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 05:02:16 AM AEST
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| Definately can relate to this. You've just described my attempts at writing essays on English Literature, urgh how I detest college. In the end I give up and write pages and pages of complete nonsense. Thanks for posting. :-) |
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Re: Scrambled Words
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by EternitysLyre on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 04:46:40 AM AEST
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There is not doubt about the clout that strikes a writer cold; for in the plains of words so vast none feel they're so much bold.
Writers block, the curse to all
The wisdom stemmed, the scribbling stalled
A sense that leaves us all appalled
When one can't find that what's-it-called--
Words escape down conscious halls.
The sensation runs strong in your work.
Descriptively done.
"Injured without remedy, the truth is but your enemy."
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Re: Scrambled Words
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:03:41 AM AEST
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Beautiful scrambled words... hoping you get the much needed R&R...
Lindsey |
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