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Come In From The Cold
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 03:35:40 AM in AEST
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And he shivered from the cold
As his protectors just watched on
I sat and waited patiently
For them to make his chills all gone
But they were warm and cosy
On a day so unlike spring
Where cold the wind blew through
Did they not care for him
I tried to turn my eyes away
Thought to tend my own affairs
But my mind just kept him with me
It was more than I could bare
I turned to see his little face
And as I caught his discomfort,I could see
That I didn't need my jacket
Not near as much as he
So I beckoned to this little boy
His steps took him quite a while
But when I draped my jacket 'round him
He was quick to give a smile
All snuggled in his new found warmth
His mouth gave way to words
And the way he sweetly thanked me
Was a delight for me to have heard
I lost a darn good jacket
Once before when on a train
I gave one once,I gave one twice
If need be,I'll give again
It wasn't really lost
It just found a new ride
And not a million gorgeous jackets
Could top the feeling left inside
My only sadness of the day
Was to leave him in the selfish hold
Of the ones who should have warmed him
And brought him in from the cold
That little boy stayed with me
In my mind,and even now
I shed a tear or two
When I sit and wonder how
How can the ones they look to
For love and its protection
See the sadness and the pain
Yet turn with full rejection
This little boy,this little man
Worth his weight in gold
Only wanted some protection
To be brought in from the cold
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-10-13 03:35:40]
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Re: Come In From The Cold
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 03:55:05 AM AEST
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Oh how very touching....warmed my heart inside and out!
Lovely, beautiful fellow feeling of a write
Lovingcritters
Sharon you are all right!
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Re: Come In From The Cold
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by TearS on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 04:04:41 AM AEST
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| Well, the feeling should have been like this...Nice... |
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Re: Come In From The Cold
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 05:35:28 AM AEST
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Aww this is so sweet, and you are so sweet to care for this little boy. It's good to see you still posting here occassionally (I need to learn how to spell)
Such a sweet write.
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Re: Come In From The Cold
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 05:53:05 AM AEST
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| The caring, sweet nature of you ... beautiful write ... Jan |
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Re: Come In From The Cold
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 06:48:25 AM AEST
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You're either gonna have to stop riding trains or buy stock in a coat factory...lol Your heart is ageless as is your writing. Welcome back! (((blondie)))
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Re: Come In From The Cold
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 07:38:28 AM AEST
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Awww another warm and caring poem that shows the true nature of your heart...
Hugs
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Re: Come In From The Cold
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 09:48:20 AM AEST
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We are given moments where we can warm or walk away....you are a special angel
Shari |
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Re: Come In From The Cold
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 11:14:01 AM AEST
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| awww, beautiful poem from your sweet and caring heart and soul, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Come In From The Cold
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by Merry on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 07:04:27 PM AEST
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lovely write - to give is divine - it will come back to you ten fold - bless you
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Re: Come In From The Cold
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 07:31:57 PM AEST
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what you do with my heart in your writing, you are so alive, and i`m so glad I know you. wonderful work. Crow
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