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Epitaph
Contributed by
Etah
on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 03:52:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Each night I drift to fitful sleep
My dreams are strained my frown is deep
Every morning I wake early
Cold, sweating, alive but barely
With tangled sheets enclosing me
Each day I fight to struggle free
I feel trapped, surrounded, broken
All my friends just watch me choking
I hate them, I hate myself
I just cant cope, this life is hell
The more they know, the less I share
For all the signs that others bare,
I myself have clearly shown
And now I feel more alone
Everything I see turns grey
Everyone just turns away
Outside Im silent and appear calm
Inside I hear a deafening alarm
It echoes all round my brain
And my ears go numb from the pain
So heres the end to my faade
As my world falls apart
Finally, i know it will end
And I hold up a gun to my head
Copyright ©
Etah
... [
2003-10-13 15:52:27]
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Re: Epitaph
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 04:00:50 PM AEST
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| Truly and deeply wishing you better days...... |
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Re: Epitaph
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by Chanti on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 08:01:46 PM AEST
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| Beautiful... I really love it, I used to feel that way but i dont anymore... I hope your feeling alot better than that now... |
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Re: Epitaph
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by Jilli_bean on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 09:32:36 PM AEST
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all I can say is cute...
words are words...just some actually mean something
"reality is scary i'm surprized anyone can cope"
cute |
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Re: Epitaph
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 10:08:56 PM AEST
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Emotional, powerful and deep. This is a very personal and sad write. I am glad that you are feeling better now, I can relate completely. I hope that you only go uphill from here and that your life is filled with joy and laughter...
stacey |
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