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Leaving
Contributed by
WiLlYwOnKa
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Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 07:45:57 PM in AEST
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Clouds forming up in the sky that were gray as steel
Was the day I found out you were leaving
I had to do something to keep you here with me
You had to leave and I just wanted to burst
I was like a water tower with a tiny crack
Then it came to me
No matter where you were
You would always be where it was most important
The one place no one can touch
My Heart is your special place
There you will be with your lovely enigmatic smile
Those joyous moments we had together will never fade
I love you Babe
Always and Forever
Copyright ©
WiLlYwOnKa
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2003-10-13 19:45:57]
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Re: Leaving
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by Ramfire on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 07:57:54 PM AEST
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Losing someone is hard to take. Your lines really spell that out: "Clouds forming up in the sky that were gray as steel
Was the day I found out you were leaving
I had to do something to keep you here with me"
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Re: Leaving
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by garyh on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 01:03:29 AM AEST
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| very lovely words for a sad occasion, you did a great job. |
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