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Curdle
Contributed by
CARAAAAA
on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 12:32:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The clot of assurance
assuaged by his inner vulnerability
Covertly ,
Proclaimed to himself imwardly
I am bleeding now
The dollop of me is gone
I dont beseech
but Ill always be able to see
Copyright ©
CARAAAAA
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2003-10-14 12:32:38]
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Re: Curdle
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 06:12:30 PM AEST
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| Hmmmmm....... a puzzling peice. It left me searching each line for the meaning. You'd leave and hint here and a clue there, but in the end I caught a glimpse of your thought. Just like a riddle. Very thought provoking- I like it! |
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