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I'll Not Be Witness
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 10:05:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Where once I walked with ease,arm in arm with all my dreams
Now I tread with loving fear,a product of my hurt it seems
I watch you as you speak,words flow from deep within
The sadness paints its portrait,my heart has known your sin
Belief and trust seem withered,not quite knowing how to be
I toss and turn with darkness,sleeping with the memory
Im not blind to your sincerity,I see more than you show
But time is all thats left for me,and of fear I can't let go
All I can do is stand here,as you dance your heart around
I'm lost in all the pain of the past,lost smiles can't be found
Patience must be ridden,please respect my time of fear
And know that if you play me out,I'll not be witness to another tear
For you have taken what little I had,after I gave until near dead
I could have given up on life,but I chose to breathe instead
Today I stand much stronger,not of heart but of sheer will
Because I remember all you did,in dreams it haunts me still
No.I'll not be witness to another fallen tear
I will not let your love be something I should fear
I will walk away before another teardrop falls
Because I'll not sit with pain,witnessing anything like before
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LovingWhispers
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2003-10-14 22:05:33]
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Re: I'll Not Be Witness
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 10:08:38 PM AEST
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Oh yes, this poem is excellent. I can relate to this - the whole walking away and not sheding another tear - I can relate to that so much. I loved this poem, thank you so much for sharing.
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Re: I'll Not Be Witness
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 10:13:55 PM AEST
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| once again......so tearfully sad and beautiful....... |
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Re: I'll Not Be Witness
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 12:20:46 AM AEST
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Sadly beautiful...
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Re: I'll Not Be Witness
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 12:39:08 AM AEST
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| It's hard to comment on this ... as I can't bear to read the words you write, although beautifully written, leave me feeling very, very sad ... Jan |
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Re: I'll Not Be Witness
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 12:40:10 AM AEST
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This is so very sad but hauntingly beautiful..."Today I stand much stronger not of heart but of sheer will" I have been there
Hugs
Shari |
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Re: I'll Not Be Witness
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by Merry on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 09:39:19 AM AEST
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this is so sad to read - made cry - the poem is beautifully written, as always you express your feelings so well
merry |
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Re: I'll Not Be Witness
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 11:35:44 AM AEST
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| right from the heart, strength in this. |
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