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Fear
Contributed by
hope
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Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 11:35:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Fear is something I cant explain
You only know if you felt the same
The feeling of extreme fright
Thinking someone is coming in the night
Your heart is racing
Your body shaking
You stare at the door
Just waiting, anticipating
If only their was someone here
Someone to keep your nightmares clear
If only the lock would keep them out
If only someone could hear my shouts
Why do they torment me this way
Why do they proceed to stay
They haunt me in the night
Knowing of my past of frights
They whisper in my ear
Knowing each of my worst fears
Every noise I am aware
Crouching in the corner so very scared
Copyright ©
hope
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2003-10-14 23:35:32]
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Re: Fear
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by EmSal on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 06:18:51 AM AEST
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A very good write. Thanks for sharing.
Emma. |
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Re: Fear
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 09:40:40 AM AEST
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Fear haunts everyone, some more than others. This poem put into words how I feel when I have a panic attack or when I forget to take my tablets. An excellent write, thankyou so much for sharing.
-hugz- stacey |
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Re: Fear
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 07:03:37 PM AEST
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Wow that was intense. I'm feeling it! Great write!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Fear
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 01:58:16 AM AEST
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I feel... I don't know, protective. Here's another hug.
Take care, ok?
David |
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