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Voices Of Reason
Contributed by
jaeann
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Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 12:04:48 PM in AEST
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What can you do? they say....
We've been around here forever,
clogging your mind,
blocking your soul,
your life, our will to sever.
You cannot heal yourself,
you'll never wander free,
we were handed down from yesterday,
we kept you alive, don't you see?
Hush.... little one....
close your eyes,
we'll block them out for you,
we'll bury all the lies.
No need to look for solace,
hush now.... stay where you are,
there's no one out there to save you,
don't start running, you'll go way too far.
Leave now your worries,
we can take care of everything,
we're always here reminding you,
it is your sanity we can bring.
Leave the tears as they fall,
futility is never all that bad,
use them to wash away those years
leaving you so very sad.
Hush now....... don't say any words,
if you begin we cannot prevent your fall,
they'll never understand you,
we'll arm you with ways to enthrall.
Listen not to the cracking,
feel not the rushing cold,
Sssshhhhh.... rest now inside your darkness,
nothing here to be told.
Have no fear of the outside world,
we'll never let them in,
no one but us......
will ever know your sins.
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2003-10-15 12:04:48]
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Re: Voices Of Reason
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 12:10:30 PM AEST
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| excellent, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Voices Of Reason
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 02:19:30 PM AEST
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very good write
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Re: Voices Of Reason
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by POOBEAR on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 03:23:10 PM AEST
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Hi,
This is really deep and touching to me.
I fear the outside world so much.
Your friend,
Lynn |
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Re: Voices Of Reason
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 03:45:32 PM AEST
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your life, our will to sever.
I loved that line liked all of thise I hear those voices at times as well. Keep yer chin up and listen to the voices that calm you.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Voices Of Reason
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by koqitiana on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 04:41:15 PM AEST
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| This is very nice. Sometimes the enemy comes and fool us into thinking he is all we need but he is here to decieve. Our Father is the only way. Fear Him when come time to judgement He is the only one who decides where we go. I hear them too but I put them out because it is the enemy who tells you wrong. If evil thought occurs cast them out and only hear the good. |
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Re: Voices Of Reason
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 05:48:12 PM AEST
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| Very intense, incredible write ... Jan |
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Re: Voices Of Reason
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 07:46:47 PM AEST
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| this kind-of casts a spell over the reader, great work, Crow |
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Re: Voices Of Reason
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by venkat on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 02:22:41 AM AEST
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| Wonderful..venkat |
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Re: Voices Of Reason
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by TearS on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 07:05:28 AM AEST
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| !Another nice piece of yours, Great!!! |
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