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The Road Home
Contributed by
Avarice_Riot
on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 12:39:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Lines of the earth, guide me
I've lost my way and I don't
Know where home is.
The arrows seem to point everywhere
And I in the fear of sinking deeper
Will brood in this perpetual nightmare
In this beautiful melancholy
In this corrupting temptation
In this immure glasshouse
Wishing to die and be reborn
Strike the chord and let the notes
Come alive within me
Let me break these barriers and rediscover
The road home.
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2003-10-15 12:39:51]
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Re: The Road Home
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by Broken-glass on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 12:52:43 PM AEST
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| Il ike this very much, it touched me. I know that feeling of being lost and confused, like you do not belong. I'm sure you will find your way eventually....... |
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Re: The Road Home
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 10:36:58 PM AEST
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| this is excellent, i love it, your gentle poem says so much:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Road Home
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by Ronald on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 04:38:33 AM AEST
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| Hey, nice poem and i wish you all the best in finding your 'home' |
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Re: The Road Home
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by Barky on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 08:35:53 AM AEST
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| i like this poem a lot. very symbolic, very creative. |
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Re: The Road Home
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by wray on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 05:55:00 AM AEST
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| Something most of us can definitely relate to. I really really feel these words. Hope I can break the barriers and find my way too :( |
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