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Uconditional Love
Contributed by
stephierose
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Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 08:56:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The world is closing in on me
Death runs through my blood
Every person shuts me out
Like I'm not good enough
My thoughts are slowly changing
Now I see the light
Everytime I talk to you
I see my life again
It hasn't changed a bit
But you make it worth the pain
You care about me
And that's a first
It feels so good to recieve
What I am always giving
Unconditional love
To the one that I am missing
Poem by : Stephanie Verdon
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stephierose
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2003-10-16 20:56:20]
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Re: Uconditional Love
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by poeticbliss on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 09:08:51 PM AEST
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| I hope everything works out for you. I enjoyed your poem. I could really feel the emotion you were trying to get across. |
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Re: Uconditional Love
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 04:53:05 AM AEST
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| Don't worry Stephanie, if your love is strong it will always find a way to flourish and grow....take care |
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Re: Uconditional Love
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by Trisha on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 02:03:59 AM AEST
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| i hope everything works out with you. i hope you just had a bad day |
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Re: Uconditional Love
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 06:55:15 PM AEST
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I know what yoouu mean. My parents didn't want me to be with my girlfriend either. But I held on and waited. In time they understood. Hold on to love. Never let go.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Uconditional Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 12:30:57 PM AEST
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| this is a lovely poem! |
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