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Galaxy Gone Wrong
Contributed by
lunablue
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Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 11:12:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm not the star you think I am
not the part I play,
not the moon-eyed girl you saw
in dreams of yesterday.
You're the meteor I didn't know
removed the scars of me.
Shooting through the blackened sky
from earth your trail I see.
Your path is soaring much too high
far away from here,
to see my lonesome watching
through my telescope of fear.
Copyright ©
lunablue
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2003-10-16 23:12:22]
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Re: Galaxy Gone Wrong
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by garyh on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 11:19:44 PM AEST
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| very nicely written.. and very emotional too... i hope you are better now... |
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Re: Galaxy Gone Wrong
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 03:23:23 AM AEST
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| Cool write ... love the metaphors ... and especially the words "through my telescope of fear" ... Jan |
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Re: Galaxy Gone Wrong
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by venkat on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 06:43:37 AM AEST
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| cool yet emotional..well written. venkat |
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Re: Galaxy Gone Wrong
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 12:53:58 PM AEST
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Awesome metaphors. I too like the telescope line. Very enjoyable read!
~ Moonlit |
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