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Missing Mom
Contributed by
lowman613
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Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 11:35:14 PM in AEST
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Mom I've written so many poems about you,
but I cant help to write one more,
for every year I feel the loss through & through,
that you'll never walk in my door,
Its going on three years,
since I last saw your face,
I still cry those tears,
that memory I cant erase,
It hurts me now like the first day,
I thought this would get easier in time,
but the more I sit here and pray,
it turns out to be in rhyme,
Poetry is all I have,to say how I feel,
a letter of hope to you,
to help my heart heal,
to help me get through,
I miss you more as each year pass by,
because its longer that I've seen you last,
so much pain,I start to cry,
I think about the past,
Mom,I'm still missing you,
I know you can feel it from me,
I dont know what to do,
to send this pain free,
theres only one thing I'd like to say,
I love you more & more,
I will never forget all the days,
those memories I will adore!
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lowman613
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2003-10-16 23:35:14]
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Re: Missing Mom
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 11:53:45 PM AEST
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Its been near 15 years since my mum passed and I still shed tears and wish and pray to have her here again..the emptiness never strays far..if at all it does stray.
I couldn't help but read through tears on this one...Beautiful and very touching
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Re: Missing Mom
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by Cancer on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 11:57:29 PM AEST
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very touching. not my usual bag, but i still enjoyed it. i'm sorry for your loss. a fitting memorial write.
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Re: Missing Mom
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by venkat on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 02:31:47 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written and it is heart touching. venkat |
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Re: Missing Mom
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 07:15:57 AM AEST
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There is nothing wrong with finding it hard. I still find it hard to think about my sisters boyfriend who passed away and that was six years ago. I can only imagine how you must feel without your mother around. My mother means the world to me, and as I am only 16, I can't imagine ever being without her. This was a lovely tribute to your mum, and I am sure she is looking down on you smiling, because she has such a beautiful and kind hearted daughter.
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Re: Missing Mom
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 08:33:04 AM AEST
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Just keep her close in your heart and she is never far away...and keep writing about it
It will never really be easy but maybe someday you will find some peace
Shari |
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Re: Missing Mom
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by Edubs on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 09:13:37 AM AEST
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I can relate. It hurts to see that no matter how many years pass the pain remains as fresh as the minute you heard the news.
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Re: Missing Mom
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by desertrose on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 11:17:04 PM AEST
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Hi Chris first thank you for the comments on my poem.Just reading your poems I feel I know you :) Beautiful writings This one touched my heart as two years ago Dec 2nd my best friend passed away(my mom). I have a memorial tree on my site where my members have lit a candle.Please come light one in memory of your mom and join my support group.
http://www.todays-woman.net
Rose
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