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nonsensical loathe-some?
Contributed by
chrispywho
on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 12:04:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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always push me away
without using force,
all this media flare, telling
and forcing me to think
or not to think, is that the plan?
when im down and out
would she still be by my side. who?
be I stuck, would you write back
at the hip, she tore my grip
away from.
all over my skin, forcing
me to tear within
i hate the way it makes me feel
away, society and ideal.
wishing to tear, all from me
without support.
hindrances from outside and in
why me? what was my sin
so great to deserve.
all this anguish. loathe.
fasten it up. i cant breathe
on and on never reaching the end
love, i would send. but it was taken.
hung up on them...hung up on me
i am my own fear. loathe.
keep bleeding, keep weeping
an offering of melancholy, I am scared
to venture in. without a light of depression
deeper in debt
broken heart doth mend
the loser in the end
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2003-10-17 00:04:11]
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Re: nonsensical loathe-some?
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by EmSal on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 02:24:26 AM AEST
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Oh my! Powerful write indeed...I hope you find your way very soon...not be the loser. All the best.
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Re: nonsensical loathe-some?
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by Edubs on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 09:10:37 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this poem. Sad, made me reflect.
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