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A Helpless Turning
Contributed by
TearS
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Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 06:42:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Today, Ill be left here alone
Today, you are going to say bye
Today, all the lights will leave me
Today, Ill be here for just to cry.
Yesterday, we were very excited
Yesterday, I drank your wet lips
Yesterday, you embraced me tight
Yesterday, your promise was a lie.
Tomorrow, Ill sleep under the tree
Tomorrow, brown leaves will start to fall
Tomorrow, you may come with some flowers
Tomorrow, from this world Im already gone.
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TearS
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2003-10-17 06:42:28]
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Re: A Helpless Turning
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 07:05:31 AM AEST
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ooo I enjoyed this very much and I agree...that time makes people cry very much so. Very well written, I specially enjoyed the way you emphasised the today, yesterday and tomorrow of it.
-hugz-stacey |
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Re: A Helpless Turning
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 04:41:38 AM AEST
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| The presentation that I liked much here.It's really cute, the second stanza,I liked it very much.Thank you. |
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