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Poetic Justice
Contributed by
Coquillion
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Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 04:24:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am truly sorry.
( but theres nothing I can do )
One of my demons has escaped
And its coming after YOU!!
Its one of the little furry ones
( with red scales underneath )
You know the one with long sharp claws
And little razor teeth.
Its the female Im afraid
( the one that YOU created )
and though it was really made for me
Its YOU she always hated.
Poetic justice dont you think?
( for without your vicious spite )
the demon she would never be
And wouldnt be loose tonight.
Now in truth it makes me glad
( and I wish that I could see )
my demon rip you limb from limb
for what you did to me.
Now Im truly happy
( and soon YOU will be dead )
I hope my demon eats your heart
And brings me back your head !!!!!
Copyright ©
Coquillion
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2003-10-18 04:24:43]
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Re: Poetic Justice
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by Broken_Skin on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 06:25:10 AM AEST
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i really like this, its something i should of wrote about my recent ex, im going to submit something i wrote about him soon, you might like it...
broken skin x
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Re: Poetic Justice
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 12:03:55 PM AEST
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This is such a fantastic poem!! There were bits in it that made me chuckle and there were bits that I could really relate to!
A truly awesome write!!
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Re: Poetic Justice
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 05:12:07 PM AEST
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| Wow... such hatred ... but extremely well written - love the metaphors ... Jan |
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Re: Poetic Justice
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by TheWildBeliever on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 02:36:34 AM AEST
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| such a disturbing poem........ its good though |
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