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Melissa's Poems I
Contributed by
norm
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Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 09:29:29 AM in AEST
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didactic
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I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
That the dreams in which I'm dying,
Are the best I've ever had
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Life is full of decisions,
So be careful what you choose.
Beacause life is yours to cherish,
But it's also yours to lose.
Live your life while you can
It doesn't last too long
Cherish what you have,
Because before you know it- it's gone
Copyright ©
norm
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2003-10-18 09:29:29]
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Re: Melissa's Poems I
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by Philipa on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 09:38:27 AM AEST
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Norm I think your granddaughter has talent. And thinking back to my dreams...I have to agree with her. LOL Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Melissa's Poems I
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 10:11:56 AM AEST
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Great going, Melissa... very lovely indeed... Keep it up.
Jenni
Thanks for sharing this, Norm. |
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Re: Melissa's Poems I
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 10:40:10 AM AEST
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*applauds*
wow norm..you must be very proud..this is one really great lil piece..Love the rhythm
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Re: Melissa's Poems I
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 10:50:14 AM AEST
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Melissa sounds very smart indeed, for I never really thought of that......... Tis true what she says, and she says it with style. Tell her it's lovely. I think it's absolutely smashing- short and to the point, graceful, stylish.
I love it!
Best wishes to Melissa, you, and the rest of your clan,
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Re: Melissa's Poems I
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 11:25:05 AM AEST
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very talented, and much wisdom departed
Shari |
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Re: Melissa's Poems I
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 11:40:59 AM AEST
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Dear Norm,
Your beautiful granddaughter writes like someone close to her.
His name is Norm, and she's got poems in her too.
How very wonderful to have a granddaughter so sweet, so intelligent like you!
Please tell her how much we enjoyed her poetry.
Ask her to do it again.....for all of us to read and see!
Warm love to your granddaughter dear.
Lovingcritters
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Re: Melissa's Poems I
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 11:55:29 AM AEST
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| dearest melissa, this is great, i hope to see more from you, might you open an account ? talent shines in your family! hugs n' love to you and grampa norm:) nessa |
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Re: Melissa's Poems I
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by shelby on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 12:23:09 PM AEST
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Norm Melissa shows great talent here just as her grandfather does it nice that you share this great gift, enjoyable read!
Michelle |
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Re: Melissa's Poems I
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 04:23:41 PM AEST
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| what a great piece, you are very proud of her. Crow |
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Re: Melissa's Poems I
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by PoloRM on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 02:14:53 PM AEST
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Oh Norm Thy Proud One.
I’ve wished for death a couple times
As my life is always torn
But one thing I never wished for
Is wishing I was never born.
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I looked to see if I could add
Anything to your poem, which is quite sad
In few lines you’ve had your say
I wouldn’t read it any other way.
Life’s a maze where we choose our trails
And every path will have its tales
The longer the way, the more you bear
The more you bear, the more you have to spare.
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I spoke my mind, it is all there
Now it’s time for me to be fair
So this time I’ll speak my heart
Both those poems are pieces of art.
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