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The Bloody Picture
Contributed by
eviltinkerbell25
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Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 10:53:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Im gonna draw a picture,
A picture with a twist,
I'll draw it with a razor blade,
I'll draw it on my wrist,
And as I draw this picture,
A fountain will appear,
And as this fountain flows,
My troubles dissapear.
I find it kind of funny,
I find it kind of sad,
Cause the dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had.
Copyright ©
eviltinkerbell25
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2003-10-18 22:53:35]
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Re: The Bloody Picture
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by stephierose on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 11:05:55 PM AEST
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This poem is soo deep, It was soo sad, yet beautiful at the same time, I really respect you for posting this.. it is sadly beautiful
Stephanie |
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Re: The Bloody Picture
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 11:26:39 PM AEST
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| Excellent write ... Jan |
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Re: The Bloody Picture
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 12:20:44 AM AEST
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| great write, i look forward to more of your poetry, warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Bloody Picture
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 01:32:20 AM AEST
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| Awesome poem..... don't ever give in to your thoughts...keep writing the pain will some day subside. Truly wonderful poem! |
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Re: The Bloody Picture
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by Cancer on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 03:24:54 AM AEST
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very powerful. bleeding with dark beauty. in such a short write, a lifetime of agony is painted. esp. loved the last stanza. great write.
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Re: The Bloody Picture
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by EternitysLyre on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 10:23:44 AM AEST
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| Damn that's good. I'm not sure rhythm impresses others as much as it catches my eye, but by my standards, this is a masterpeice. Simple, yet profound; Dark, yet sound. Keep it up. |
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Re: The Bloody Picture
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 03:38:52 PM AEST
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The first stanza I've seen before its a quote from somewhere, but if it describes you thats cool just say thats its not your own work.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: The Bloody Picture
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by mercedes on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 10:02:31 AM AEST
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| Had i not been following someones comments, i would of never read this poem. Im glad I did, i loved it. So sad and dark. |
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Re: The Bloody Picture
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 06:20:21 PM AEST
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| This is an awsome poem and I can realy relate cause i have been there!! Keep on writting cause i will keep on reading! |
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Re: The Bloody Picture
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:25:20 AM AEST
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| Mad World, huh? Interesting. |
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