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Half Opened Eyes
Contributed by
withpen_inhand
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Friday, 12th July 2002 @ 10:46:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I walked through life,With half opened eyes
Not looking at the future,Living one day at a time
Life held no future,For someone like me
I was alone in this world,As alone as I could be
Then I met you,And I finally changed my mind
It was love at first sight,But we did'nt know it at the time.
I knew it was love,Our hearts fell into place
When everywhere I looked,I saw your pretty face
I had you in my thoughts,All through the day
You were on my mind always,You never went away.
I started looking to the future,Something I could never see
I started seeing us together,With you always beside me.
Then I spoke of this to you,And much to my surprise
I found YOU were looking ,Through half opened eyes
You said you loved me,And I also heard you say
"I dont look to the future,I live day to day"
The bright light in my eyes,That day dimmed for me
I had my eyes wide open,But I still couldn't see
And then I saw it so plain,It was sharp reality
You saw no future,No future for you and me
Once again I go through life,With half opened eyes
Never looking at the future,Living one day at a time
July 12, 2002
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Re: Half Opened Eyes
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by lil_hummingbird on
Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 03:13:30 AM AEST
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| I find that most of the time it is best to live day to day and not take things for granted.and to see things through others eyes.Very well written! |
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Re: Half Opened Eyes
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by withpen_inhand on
Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 04:31:09 AM AEST
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| Thank you for the comment.I totaly agree with you on seeing things through others eyes.It gives a greater concept of life.A much wider view. |
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