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''Gentle is the Night''
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 07:44:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Gentle is the night
That carries the forsaken message
The whispers of the wind
The twinkles of the star-lit carraige
Easy is the slow-come day
The murky sun, the smothered heat
The chilly night long wished away
The sagging heart;
Its weighted beats
Day and night,
the endless exchange
Joy and anguish,
the vast terrain
To cross from one
and enter another
To pass the barrier-
-the walls go forverer-
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EternitysLyre
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2003-10-20 07:44:10]
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Re: ''Gentle is the Night''
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 10:20:46 AM AEST
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Ahhh surveying the earth ..from one beautiful change to the next.You have captured it well
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Re: ''Gentle is the Night''
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by addie on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 03:41:33 PM AEST
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that was really brilliant piece of description .;... keep it up
thanks for sharing
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Re: ''Gentle is the Night''
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by n2dep2care on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 09:43:32 AM AEST
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Yet again I am amazed at your skill to draw me into your poem. I felt the tug of your words in the give and take that goes on daily, which we have no way to escape. I can identify very much with your words and vision in this work.
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