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THE LOSS OF A LOVED ONE
Contributed by
christmas_kud
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Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 05:53:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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the loss of a loved one
can not be explained
they are taken from us
no one's to blame
only questions remainwhere they lay
where to go? what to do? what a shame
wy did they go? was it their time?
and if it was when is mine?
i mean how long do i wait for my wish come true
a day, a month, a year or two?
i want t die now, make it all end
no one loves me more than a friend
i ask out people, thats all they say
we're good friends let's keep it that way
i'm sick of this ball that spins us around
going faster when good, slowing down when it's wrong
i guess that's the reason moset of my friends are gone
i say to myself some ay we'll unite
some day soon, or maybe tonight
i'll end it all with one good shot
so i guess this is my last day to all who care
i'll be another loved one lost in despare
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Re: THE LOSS OF A LOVED ONE
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by BlackFire9786 on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 06:01:38 PM AEST
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so sad, i know how you are feeling, i've lost my share of loved ones myself, and i have lost some to suicide, very real write with lots of emotion, great job
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Re: THE LOSS OF A LOVED ONE
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 07:42:31 PM AEST
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And yet another I see with untapped talent.Search yourself...know yourself and most of all find love for yourself.You are special..and need to realise this.One day a love will come and knock you off your feet but it will be short lived if you cannot love yourself as they do.Im sorry for your loss but am hopeful for your gain
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Re: THE LOSS OF A LOVED ONE
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 07:49:53 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC... I see such talent in this poem...but it needs a spell check.. Keep up the good work....and stay strong...
Jenni |
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