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Time
Contributed by
garyh
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Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 01:34:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Get up, dont slope around
Times going to come for you to stand
Let the worries be gone
Find happiness fulfill you
Everything is going to come around
Times past without joy
But time will turn to ecstasy
May your moments be happy
And be not mad
Everything comes
Everything stands
Just be yourself
And not Uncle Sam
Copyright ©
garyh
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2003-10-21 13:34:56]
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Re: Time
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 04:01:26 PM AEST
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Hmmm....... Uncle Sam? You lost me on the ending there. But except for that, smashing write. The part about "time will return with ecstasy", that was lovely.
Great job =)
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Re: Time
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 04:34:53 PM AEST
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Very good write, I also did not get the uncle sam ending.
Well done. |
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Re: Time
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by ichiban_girl on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 11:53:58 AM AEST
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| I liked it very much. Keep 'em coming. |
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