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Flame
Contributed by
darien
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Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 02:27:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The tender flame
Burning on strong
Never tentative
Rushing along
Nature's destruction
Razing the land
Engulfing as hatred
Always in command
Always moving forward
Never quite halting
Holding its presence
And never faulting
The flame is a being
Demanding respect
Destroying without thought
Without feelings of regret
Mentally perfect
The fire never ending
Singe all of life
Immortally sending
Copyright ©
darien
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2003-10-21 14:27:51]
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Re: Flame
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 03:55:59 PM AEST
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| hatred burns like a flame, engulfing us all...... strong words, darien. I like this one =) |
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Re: Flame
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 07:07:22 PM AEST
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| Great poem ... good rhyme and rhythm too ... Jan |
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Re: Flame
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by SAT on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 04:00:24 PM AEST
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i love it more than you can imagine! it is unbeleivable! keep on striving for the top! and dont ever change!
"an eye for an eye makes the whole world blind" |
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