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What I See
Contributed by
Elf
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Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 06:54:01 PM in AEST
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Mirror tell me what you see.
Because what I see isnt me.
Behind the makeup, stance, and clothes,
who I am, no one knows.
Just who am I, I want to know.
To see the real me and let it show.
But behind the makeup, stance, and clothes,
All but one will never know.
For as I peer I begin to see
that traces of all are within me.
Ive got friends from all around.
My attitude is still wild and loud.
Thus my appearance stays the same.
From minute to minute and day to day.
I remain dark and dreary.
Yet who I am, I know clearly.
I'm not just the girl next door,
Or the girl you all say is "too hardcore"
I am the one who saw her fate.
And saved herself before it was to late.
So mirror I've told you what I see.
Now I know the true me.
Go ahead, tell me what you see.
For that alone will be enough for me.
Copyright ©
Elf
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2003-10-21 18:54:01]
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Re: What I See
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by frozensuicide on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 08:05:19 PM AEST
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| wow... i really liked thisw one. it really spoke to me! good write! i loved the way youy let hte words flow. |
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Re: What I See
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by Philipa on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 08:31:44 PM AEST
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I see someone who knows who she is...and that's a good thing. Thanks for sharing.
Philipa |
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